The bar graph given provides information about how the number of men and women studying varied across six different subjects in Toronto in 2013.
Overall
, the subject with the most learners is social sciences, while
the subject with the least is clearly agriculture
.
If we take the categories in combination, it is evident that there are many more females studying most of the subjects, except for engineering, science and math, together with
agriculture
, where the numbers are equal. The biggest gap between males and females seems to be in engineering, with males having more than 2000 pupils and females having less than 1000 students, equivalent to a more than 1000 learners gap. Another highlight is agriculture
, with the number of attendees of both genders being equal.
In total, the bar chart is displayed in a way that emphasizes the difference between the number of scholars, thus
highlighting the general trend among students, with social sciences having the most at approximately 7000 learners and agriculture
having the least at roughly less than 300 people researching.Submitted by minhlieu.hnd on
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