The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the procedures
of
how Change preposition
for
plastic
bottles
are recycled. Overall
, it is evident that there are 9 steps from the unused bottles
collected to become the end
products.
The process began from collect
the Change preposition
with collecting
bottles
trash. Change noun form
bottle's
bottles'
First,
plastic
bottles
on
the bin will Change preposition
in
transport
to the recycling centre with a garbage truck. In the centre, the workers separate which Wrong verb form
be transported
bottles
that still available to recycle. After the bottles
ready
, Add a missing verb
are ready
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
goes
to the compressing machine that Correct subject-verb agreement
go
built
blocks. They are Wrong verb form
builds
then
shredded into small plastic
particles before continue
to process.
The Wrong verb form
continuing
plastic
pellets are produced, then
they Correct word choice
and then
heated
and burned to form raw material. Add a missing verb
are heated
Finally
, the raw materials are set before move
to the Change the verb form
moving
end
of the cycle. It can be used to produce end
products such
as t-shirt
, Fix the agreement mistake
t-shirts
bag
, Fix the agreement mistake
bags
pen
, et cetera. These whole processes are Fix the agreement mistake
pens
the
cyclical steps so the Correct article usage
apply
end
products that already
made could Add a missing verb
are already
re-processing
again.Wrong verb form
be processed
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles, end with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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