The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the procedures

of

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for

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how

plastic

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bottles

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are recycled.

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, it is evident that there are 9 steps from the unused

bottles

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collected to become the

end

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products. The process began

from collect

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the

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bottles

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bottle's

bottles'

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trash.

First,

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plastic

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bottles

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on

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in

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the bin will

transport

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be transported

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to the recycling centre with a garbage truck. In the centre, the workers separate which

bottles

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that still available to recycle. After the

bottles

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ready

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are ready

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,

it

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they

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goes

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to the compressing machine that

built

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builds

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blocks. They are

then

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shredded into small

plastic

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particles before

continue

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continuing

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to process. The

plastic

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pellets are produced,

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then

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and then

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they

heated

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are heated

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and burned to form raw material.

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, the raw materials are set before

move

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moving

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to the

end

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of the cycle. It can be used to produce

end

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products

such

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as

t-shirt

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t-shirts

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,

bag

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bags

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,

pen

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pens

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, et cetera. These whole processes are

the

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apply

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cyclical steps so the

end

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products that

already

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are already

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made could

re-processing

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be processed

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again.