The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph depicts the proportion of women who attend higher degrees in 5 countries consisting of the UK, the USA, Canada, Japan, and Germany between 1970 and 2005.
Overall
, it can be seen that the rate of women moving to higher education was highest in every country in 2005,
while
, in the past, the same
percentage
was only in Canada.
To begin
with, the
percentage
of females going to college in Japan was the lowest in both years 20% in 1970 and jumped twice the
percentage
of 1970 in 2005.
Furthermore
, in UK and USA, have a similar trend that was roughly 35% and 40% in 1970,
then
, have risen significantly to around 60% and 57%, respectively in the next 35 years.
In addition
, the
percentage
of women who graduated in Canada has stayed the same at 60% over the given period.
Moreover
, in Germany, there has been a slight change in females going into high levels of education about 50% in 1970 and increased to approximately 55% in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment rate
  • percentage
  • decade
  • increase/decrease
  • compare/contrast
  • significant
  • socio-economic factors
  • progressive
  • minimal changes
  • hypothesize
  • global developments
  • regional developments
  • influence
  • trend analysis
  • workforce participation
  • historical context
  • labor market
  • gender gap
  • employment policies
  • cultural norms
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