What role does photography play in the context of influence and art?

Photography
rapidly processes influence and it is an
art
form.Because many influencers become famous by doing
photography
.So,
it is clear that
there are many photographers but only some of them are famous which means that
photography
is an
art
which cannot be learned by everyone.
Also
one of my friends has an amazing
photography
skill and he is a famous wildlife photographer and he is very successful in his career because of his talent and unique
art
.
Photography
rapidly processes influence and it is an
art
form.Because many influencers become famous by doing
photography
.So,
it is clear that
there are many photographers but only some of them are famous which means that
photography
is an
art
which cannot be learned by everyone.
Also
one of my friends has an amazing
photography
skill and he is a famous wildlife photographer and he is very successful in his career because of his talent and unique
art
.
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Your essay repeats the same idea without adding new information. Try to avoid redundancy to keep the reader engaged and demonstrate a deeper understanding of the topic.
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Work on structuring your essay with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. This will help your ideas flow more logically.
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Provide more detailed examples and analysis to support your points. This will make your argument more convincing.
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You make a relevant and clear connection between photography and influence as well as photography being an art form.
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The example of your friend who is a wildlife photographer adds a personal touch and strengthens your argument.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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