The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart depicts the
number
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of shop closures and openings in a specific area from 2011 to 2018.
It is clear that
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the
number
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of closed consistently outweighs the
number
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of new shop openings throughout the period, except for a short period in 2014 when they were almost equal. In 2011, the
number
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of closed and open stores began at about 6500 and 8500 respectively, indicating that more
shops
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were opening than closing.
However
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, the sections had a significant decrease in 2012 to reach 6000 closed
shops
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and 4000 new
shops
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. The
number
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of closed and newly opened
shops
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was 7000 and 5000, respectively, in 2013, which means an increase of about 25%.
While
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the new stores continued to increase at 6000, the closed
shops
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decreased gradually to about 6500 in 2014.
Furthermore
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, in 2015, the
number
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of store closures dramatically dropped to just 500,
while
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the
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of new
shops
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experienced a slight decline, falling to 4,000. From 2016 to 2018, the
number
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of store closures remains stable. The
number
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of newly opened stores decreased sharply from 4000 to 3000 during those years.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, shops with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 9 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail landscape
  • net growth
  • market dynamics
  • economic indicators
  • fluctuations
  • pivotal
  • consumption patterns
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • downward/upward trend
  • stabilize
  • recession
  • boom
  • retail sector
  • closure rate
  • inauguration/opening rate
  • consumer market
  • saturate
  • commercial viability
  • profitability
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