The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over twenty years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over twenty years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The previous table illustrates the level of waste in
million
tonnes
that 6 countries have produced in 3 years (1980,1990 and 2000).
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that from the beginning to the end of the period, almost all countries increased the amount of
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, except for Korea.
Furthermore
, Ireland started with the lowest amount and kept the position as the lowest
along with
Portugal.
Finally
, the country with the highest proportion in the 3 years was the USA. In detail, Ireland, Japan, Poland, Portugal and the USA had a constant growth in 1990 and 2000, except for Korea which was surprisingly the only nation
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waste declined to 19
million
tonnes
. In 1980, Ireland recorded the lowest figure with 0.6
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million
tonnes
. Even though it increased to 5 in 2000, it remained to be the lowest
along with
Portugal which
also
increased from 2
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and 3
million
tonnes
in 1980 and 1990 respectively to 5
million
tonnes
in 2000.
Finally
, the USA depicted the highest level of waste which was shown in the 3 years (1980, 1990 and 2000).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "along with, finally".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuate
  • sharp rise
  • decline
  • stable
  • notable
  • peak
  • dip
  • consistent
  • variation
  • contrast
  • comparison
  • aggregate
  • metric
  • figure
  • volume
  • statistics
  • data points
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