The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over twenty years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The previous table illustrates the level of waste in
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that 6 countries have produced in 3 years (1980,1990 and 2000).
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Overall
, it can be clearly seen that from the beginning to the end of the period, almost all countries increased the amount of Linking Words
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, Ireland started with the lowest amount and kept the position as the lowest Linking Words
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Finally
, the country with the highest proportion in the 3 years was the USA.
In detail, Ireland, Japan, Poland, Portugal and the USA had a constant growth in 1990 and 2000, except for Korea which was surprisingly the only nation Linking Words
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In 1980, Ireland recorded the lowest figure with 0.6 Use synonyms
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. Even though it increased to 5 in 2000, it remained to be the lowest Use synonyms
along with
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in 1980 and 1990 respectively to 5 Use synonyms
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in 2000. Use synonyms
Finally
, the USA depicted the highest level of waste which was shown in the 3 years (1980, 1990 and 2000).Linking Words
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