The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The following maps illustrate the development of Nelson

City

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from 2000 up until the present day.

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, the

city

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has tremendously developed in recent years, with the introduction of commercial facilities and a railway station. Looking at the centre,

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was empty with no construction at all, but today it features four different bike rental facilitation outlets for the public to rent bicycles.

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, a new train station has been constructed for people to travel, and its track connects with the

city

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centre. To the north side of the

city

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, we see a tall residential structure and

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a shopping complex to the north-eastern part of the

city

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. Previously, there existed a road that stretched from west to east; it is now replaced with a footpath for people to walk upon.

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, to the left of the port a new restaurant, has been opened, and on the right, a series of clubs and bars have been established.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

157 words

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infrastructure
land use
residential
commercial
green spaces
public transport
urbanization
de-urbanization
facilities
amenities
industrial
transformation
recent times
comparisons
notable
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The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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