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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line chart demonstrates three types of main fuel
production
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 from 1981 to 2000 in the United Kingdom. It can be seen from the graph that natural gas showed a stable increase, coal had a downward trend and petroleum fluctuated but
overall
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 had an upward trend. The
production
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 level of natural gas remained unchanged at 40
million
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tonnes
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 for a decade and
then
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 it grew gradually for another decade from 1991 to 2000 and reached its highest
point
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 at 100
million
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tonnes
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.The
production
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 level of petroleum fluctuated from 1981 to 1990 for 9
years
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, from its lowest
point
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 at under 100
million
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tonnes
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 to plateau at 140
million
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tonnes
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 and it dropped for three
years
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 and
then
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 the number started to climb steadily for the following 10
years
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.Coal
production
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 was stable at 80
million
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tonnes
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 for the first two
years
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 and
then
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 it plunged below 40
million
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tonnes
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 in 1984,
however
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, it rose slightly to 60
million
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tonnes
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 from 1984 to 1986, it remained unchanged for four
years
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, from
this
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point
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, it started to decline slowly for the following period, eventually reached its lowest
point
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 under 40 units. There is a cross
point
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 from 1990 to 1991, as is shown, natural gas and petroleum had an upward trend, meanwhile, the number for coal dropped, it can be assumed that the need for coal was replaced by the other two fuels.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, million, tonnes, point, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • main kinds of fuel
  • time frame
  • location
  • data
  • trends
  • increase
  • decrease
  • specific data points
  • petroleum
  • nuclear fuel
  • natural gas
  • coal
  • fluctuations
  • correlations
  • patterns
  • analyze
  • summarize
  • provide
  • general summary
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