The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two given maps compare the island before and after

construction

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for tourists. There are many facilities have been constructed

such

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as accommodations, a restaurant and reception

andthose

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and those

have been built without harming the original trees on the island. Before the

construction

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, the island was empty and only trees and

beach

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a beach

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existed. After the

construction

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beach

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the beach

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area was kept for swimming and it is linked with accommodations by footpath. A pier is built for boating and it is connected with reception and restaurant by vehicle track. The

construction

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was mainly made to facilitate

for

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apply

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tourist stay, for their visit and amusement,

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and no

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tress

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trees

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were harmed during

construction

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words construction with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

107 words

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