The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two given maps compare an island before and after the
construction
for tourists. There are many facilities have been constructed
such
as accommodations, a restaurant, a pier and a reception and those have been built without harming the original trees on the island. Before the
construction
, the island was empty and only trees and a beach existed. After the
construction
,
beach
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the beach
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area was kept for swimming and it is linked with accommodations by footpath. A pier is built for boating and it is connected with reception and restaurant by vehicle track. There are accommodations
locate
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located
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on the right side of
restaurant
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the restaurant
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and reception. All trees
are saves
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are saved
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in the same place. The
construction
was mainly made to facilitate
for
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apply
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tourist’s
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tourists’
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stay, for their visit and amusement,
no
Correct word choice
and no
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tress
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trees
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were harmed during
construction
.
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