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The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over twenty years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over twenty years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides data for the volume of
waste
 being produced in various
countries
 around the world from
1980s
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 to the year 2000. In the year 1980s ,
Waste
production
of
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 all
countries
 except for the US was fairly low with the total
of
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it
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summing up to about 35
million
tonnes
. The
Us
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,
on the other hand
, produced 131
million
tonnes
 of
waste
 in
1980s
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 which
higher
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 than double the total amount of
waste
 produced in other
countries
 combined. A close look at the table reveals that
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wast
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waste
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production
 in
1990s
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rised significatly
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rose significantly
comparing
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compared
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 to
1980s
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 and
US
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the US
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 is cheif among them,
maitaining
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maintaining
 its lead as the
conutry
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country
 with
most
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waste
 being produced with over 150
million
tonnes
 , again, higher
that
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 all other
countries
 togehter.
This
 trend of increase in
waste
production
 proceeds well into the 2000s with a lot of regions now making about the double amount of
wast
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waste
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 that they were making in the 1980s with the sum
of
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it
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approaching 270
million
tonnes
 which is staggering considering it was about 200
million
tonnes
 only 20 years ago with the US is still the largest
waste
 producer among these
countries
 .
Overall
 , we can notice a trend of
growing
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 in
waste
production
 in
countries
 that in most of them
this
 amount is more than doubled in 20 years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, countries, production, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuate
  • sharp rise
  • decline
  • stable
  • notable
  • peak
  • dip
  • consistent
  • variation
  • contrast
  • comparison
  • aggregate
  • metric
  • figure
  • volume
  • statistics
  • data points
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