Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in word, picture, music or films) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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coherence cohesion

The logical structure is somewhat present, but there is room for improvement. Make sure each paragraph logically flows from one to the next and that your argument builds coherently.

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Support your main points with more relevant and specific examples. The examples given could be strengthened by explaining how they directly relate to the argument you are making.

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Your introduction and conclusion are both present and provide a clear framework for your essay.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

291 words

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