The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table chart gives information about the comparison of one country's export prices in five different items between 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that at the beginning of the
period
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period,
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petroleum contributed the most value
while
Agricultural products and Textiles were the lowest segments.
In addition
,
at the end
of the
period
the highest number of exports valued was made by Petroleum and Textile became the smallest export sector. In 2015, the export price from Petroleum stood at $60
billion
and it had a slight increase to $62
billion
in 2016.
Similarly
, at the beginning of the
period
, engineered goods made up just under $60
billion
and grew regularly to %61
billion
in the following year.
Moreover
, the figures for agricultural products and textiles constituted precisely $30
billion
in 2015 and around $28
billion
, respectively and experienced a moderate growth
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than $4
billion
in 2016.
In contrast
, the proportion of Gems and Jewellery accounted for well above $40
billion
in 2015 and decreased steadily by $2
billion
at the end
of the
period
.
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