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The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table chart gives information about the comparison of one country's export prices in five different items between 2015 and 2016.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that at the beginning of the
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period
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 petroleum contributed the most value
while
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 Agricultural products and Textiles were the lowest segments.
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,
at the end
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 of the
period
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 the highest number of exports valued was made by Petroleum and Textile became the smallest export sector. In 2015, the export price from Petroleum stood at $60
billion
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 and it had a slight increase to $62
billion
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 in 2016.
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, at the beginning of the
period
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, engineered goods made up just under $60
billion
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 and grew regularly to %61
billion
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 in the following year.
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, the figures for agricultural products and textiles constituted precisely $30
billion
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 in 2015 and around $28
billion
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, respectively and experienced a moderate growth
less
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 than $4
billion
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 in 2016.
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, the proportion of Gems and Jewellery accounted for well above $40
billion
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 in 2015 and decreased steadily by $2
billion
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at the end
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 of the
period
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, billion with synonyms.
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