You are looking for a full-time job,and recently you saw a job opening in a advertisement. Write a letter to the company.In your letter: • introduce yourself • explain what sort of job you would like to do • and say what experience and skills you have You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to apply for the translator in your company.I saw that you have advertised in a local newspaper recently.I would really appreciate it if you could spare some of your precious time to discuss my position in a formal interview. I would like to work as a translator.

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would have a flexible work time that would

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able to do my best serve. I have completed my graduation from WSLU in 2022.

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I worked

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company

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apply

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named WORLD TRADE ORGANIZATION as

translator

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a translator

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. They couldn't pay

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a good-salary

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good salary

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that's why I would like to change my workplace. I look forward to hearing from you soon. I believe that my

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perfectly matches your requirements.Please do not hesitate to call me.

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faithfully, Sabina Abdullayeva

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language

Ensure clear and consistent use of articles (e.g., 'the translator' should be 'the position of translator').

content

Clarify and develop your points. For example, explain why flexible work time is important to you.

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Your letter clearly covers all required aspects: introduction, job preference, and relevant skills/experience.

language

Polite and professional tone throughout the letter.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

130 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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