The table below shows the amount spent on healthcare in different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The table below shows the amount spent on healthcare in different countries.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the number of
beds
per thousand of
population
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whereas
the table compares the amount of money that the governments in three nations spend on individuals and the average longevity.
Overall
, Japan has much more
beds
than any other examined countries, followed by Germany and
Netherlands
while
there is not a significant change in other nations. It
also
seems that the government expenditure on
health
is the largest in the United
States
although
Japanese life expectancy is the longest regardless of the least
health
spending. Starting with the bar graph, Japan has the most
beds
in hospitals as it has 14
beds
while
Germany comes second at 8, followed by the
Netherlands
with just over 4.
In contrast
, there is not a significant change in the number of hospital
beds
available in other nations with about 4
beds
in Australia
whereas
other countries stand below that with the United
States
having the least. Turning to the table of
health
spending, the government in the United
States
spends the most with $6,719, which is almost double as
Netherlands
whose spending is $3,481. The Japanese life expectancy is the longest at 83 regardless of the small amount of government funding of $2,581.
In contrast
, the life expectancy in the United
States
, whose spending on
health
is the largest, is the shortest at 78
while
people in the
Netherlands
live until 80 on average.
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