Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam’’ How true do you think this statement is? What are measures can the government take to discourage people from using their cars?

Several people think that the rapid increment of car owners contributes to the stagnancy of traffic in every part of the world. The statement requires supporting data to ensure how the necessary measures can be taken to eliminate

this

issue. I totally agree with the stated point that the uncontrolled amount of cars triggers a stagnant

traffics

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in big cities.

This

essay will discuss what actions can be chosen by the authorities to reduce the effect of abundant cars operating in the cities. Nowadays, In a big city, several issues

emerges

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due to

the large population, a phenomenon that

never

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been experienced before. A large

number

of people move from rural to cities triggering

number

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a number

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of issues. One of the problems is a traffic jam. The city's authority needs to regulate the

number

of personal vehicles. Putting a higher tax on the car's owner is one of the successful measures. People will think twice about having a personal car since they have to pay more to legalize their cars.

Moreover

, improving the quality and quantity of public transportation will reduce the

number

of operating personal vehicles in the big city's vicinity. By bestowing those two actions, the government will significantly and effectively tackle the traffic jam issue.