The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram depicts the process of natural honey production by bees in seven distinct stages.
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, it is evident that the cycle begins with the construction of hives
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collecting pollens from flowers and fetching them back into their hives are the next stages.
Subsequently
, drying honeycombs, before honey is ultimately prepared to consume is the pre-
last
part of the process. On closer examination
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the picture, building of bee's houses is the first step. The honey- producing cycle continues through the stages of obtaining the sweetest hidden nectar by
apis
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APIs
, choosing more appropriate blooms. Afterwards,
this
nectar is carefully transported back to the cells, before apis begin to fan speedily in order to get rid of the extra liquids in the extraction . Once the moisture is evaporated entirely, honeycombs become ready with the perfect structure of bee nectar, which allows humans to harvest bee nests and refine the extracted honey thoroughly. In succession,
this
ready sweet treat is available to be delivered to the shelves of markets and be served during
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meal time in all
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parts of the world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Metamorphosis
  • Nectar
  • Foraging
  • Pollination
  • Worker bees
  • House bees
  • Honey stomach
  • Honeycomb cells
  • Beeswax
  • Evaporation
  • Hexagon-shaped
  • Simple sugars
  • Enzymes
  • Capping
  • Preserve
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