The chart below shows the number of different kinds of vehicles registered in Europe from 1996 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the number of different kinds of vehicles registered in Europe from 1996 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram presents the total
number
of registered
vehicles
in Europe, including private
cars
, motorbikes, public
transport
, and other types, and how these numbers changed between 1996 and 2006.
Overall
, the
number
of private
cars
increased significantly,
while
motorbikes, lorries, buses, coaches, and taxis experienced declines. Notably, private
cars
were the dominant mode of
transport
, with their numbers rising from 19 million in 1996 to 24 million in 2006, which represents a 26.32% increase.
In contrast
, the
number
of motorcycles dropped by 400,000, falling from one million to 600,000, which is a sharp 40% decrease.
Similarly
, lorries saw a smaller decline of 20%, amounting to a reduction of 100,000
vehicles
.
On the other hand
, the
number
of public
transport
vehicles
, including buses, coaches, and taxis, remained constant at 100,000 throughout the decade. Despite the mixed trends across different vehicle types, the
overall
number
of registered
vehicles
in Europe increased during
this
period. The rise in private
cars
played a significant role in
this
growth, highlighting their importance as the primary means of
transport
in Europe.
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