You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The three pie charts compare the disposal approaches of hazardous
waste
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production in the
Republic
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of
Korea
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,
Sweden
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and the United Kingdom. It is noticeable that underground burial is the dominant practice of hazardous
waste
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disposal in
Sweden
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and the United Kingdom,
whereas
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the
Republic
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of
Korea
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predominantly relies on recycling.
Also
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, the United Kingdom employs two unique
waste
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handling schemes, which are not employed in the other two countries,
while
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recycling disposal is only practised in the
Republic
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of
Korea
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and
Sweden
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. In detail, underground disposal accounts for the largest share of
waste
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management in the
UK
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and
Sweden
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, comprising 82% and 55% respectively,
while
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it is only the second highest proportion (22%) in the
Republic
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of
Korea
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.
On the other hand
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, incineration is the least utilized method for managing hazardous
waste
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in all three countries, accounting for 9% in
Korea
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, 20% in
Sweden
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, and just 2% in the
UK
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. Both dumping
waste
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at sea and Chemical treatment are
also
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utilized as dangerous production disposal approaches in the
UK
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, each accounting for 8% of hazardous
waste
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disposal;
however
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, the
Republic
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of
Korea
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and
Sweden
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have never used these approaches.
In contrast
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, the
Republic
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of
Korea
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and
Sweden
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use a recycling disposal system of
waste
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in different proportions, achieving 69%, the highest proportion, in the
Republic
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of
Korea
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, and only 25% in
Sweden
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,
while
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the
UK
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does not utilize
this
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system.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, republic, korea, sweden, uk with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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