The charts below show the percentages of five kinds of book sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012. Summarise the information by selectingg and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentages of five kinds of book sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012. Summarise the information by selectingg and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The three pie charts illustrate the distribution of book
sales
by genre over a span of four decades, from 1972 to 2012.
Overall
, it is evident that the popularity of adult
fiction
significantly increased during
this
period,
while
the
sales
proportions of travel books, biographies, and other genres experienced a decline. In 1972, adults'
fiction
comprised 20% of total book
sales
, which rose dramatically to 25% in 1992, eventually surging to 45% by 2012. Meanwhile, children's
fiction
started strong at 25% but saw a decline to 20% in 1992, and only partially recovered to 25% in the final year.
This
indicates a shifting preference among readers towards adult
fiction
, with children's books losing some market share
initially
, yet stabilizing towards the end of the period.
Conversely
, the genres of biography, travel, and others exhibited a downward trend over the same timeframe. Biographies
initially
accounted for 15% of book
sales
in 1972 but experienced a slight increase to 18% in 1992 before plummeting to 10% in 2012.
Similarly
, travel books were represented by 20% in 1972 but dropped to 15% in 1992 and
further
declined to 8% by 2012. The category labelled 'others' began at 20%, rose to 22%, and culminated at 12%, reflecting a dwindling interest in these remaining genres in juxtaposition to the rising appeal of adult
fiction
.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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