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The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates outbound and inbound
UK
 travel for two decades from 1979 to 1999,
while
 the bar chart displays the favourite destinations of
UK
 citizens in 1999. Units are measured in millions.
Overall
, it can be seen that both inbound and outbound
UK
 trips witnessed an upward trend over the period given.
Furthermore
, France accounted for the most popular tourism destination for the
UK
 population in 1999.
Firstly
, the number of
UK
 residents who travelled abroad started the first year with about 13
million
 before hitting around 18 and about 33
million
 in 1984 and 1989 respectively. Afterwards, the figure continued its rising trajectory reaching 44 and 53
million
 in 1994 and 1999 respectively.
Moreover
, the number of foreign tourists visiting the
UK
 was 10
million
 in the first year,
then
 the figure gradually but consistently grew and reached a peak of 28
million
 in the
last
 year.
Secondly
, in 1999 Turkey accounted for the least favourite country, among the five mentioned, for
UK
 tourists with about 2.5
million
 visitors.
Similarly
, Greece and the USA both attracted less than 5
million
UK
 visitors in 1999.
Furthermore
, Spain and France both attracted about 10
million
UK
 citizens to their country with 9 and 12
million
 travellers respectively.
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