WRITING WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

WRITING

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line chart compares the
consumption
of four various types of
meat
in one European particular state over a period of 25 years.
Overall
, we can notice that at the beginning of
this
given time, beef was the primary source of
meat
;
however
, it saw a decline and the
consumption
of chicken reached its peak
at the end
.
To begin
, from 1979 to 1989, beef was the most famous sort of
meat
, which's
consumption
started from just 200
grams
per seven days per human and it saw a fluctuation to 1989,
whereas
chicken intake increased rapidly from just below 150
grams
to around 200
grams
per individual per
week
in 1989. It is noticeable that
consumption
of beef decreased dramatically by twice from around 200
grams
to 100
grams
per
week
from 1989 to the end of the given time, meanwhile, eating of chicken reached its peak at around 250
grams
per individual a
week
in 2004. Regarding to two other types of
meat
,
consumption
of lamb experienced a moderate decline over the period from 150
grams
per member of
family
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to approximately 70
grams
per person per
week
.
In addition
, we can see that there was a steady decrease in fish intake in the same period from just above 50
grams
per human per
week
to around 40.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, meat, grams, week with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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