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The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart displays the percentage changes in the exportation
value
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 of different categories in 2016 compared to its
value
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 in 2015. The units are measured in billions.
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, there was not a big difference in the exportation
cost
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 for all
products
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 between the two years. Despite the increase in
cost
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, all classes witnessed in the latter year, only gems and
jewelry
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 had a
value
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 reduction. In 2015 petroleum
products
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 had charged exactly 60
billion
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dollars
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 before
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 number increased to around 63
billion
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dollars
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 the next year.
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 engineered goods started the period with approximately fifty-eight
billion
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dollars
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 as an exporting charge, in 2016 their costs notably rose over sixty
billion
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. Compared with the first two groups, the other three categories had a lower exportation
value
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 in both 2015 and 2016. When it comes to gems and
jewelry
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, their initial
cost
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 was above 40
billion
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dollars
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,
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 it slightly declined until it reached 40
billion
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dollars
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 in 2016.
According to
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 the figure, the agriculture sector charged about 31
billion
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dollars
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 for their
products
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 to be exported in 2016 after they escalated the
cost
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 by probably 1
billion
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. Surprisingly, in 2016 textiles had the same exporting
value
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 as agricultural
products
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, but it had the lowest
value
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 in 2015 with around 27
billion
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dollars
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words value, cost, products, billion, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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