The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart displays the percentage changes in the exportation
value
of different categories in 2016 compared to its
value
in 2015. The units are measured in billions.
Overall
, there was not a big difference in the exportation
cost
for all
products
between the two years. Despite the increase in
cost
, all classes witnessed in the latter year, only gems and
jewelry
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had a
value
reduction. In 2015 petroleum
products
had charged exactly 60
billion
dollars
before
this
number increased to around 63
billion
dollars
the next year.
While
engineered goods started the period with approximately fifty-eight
billion
dollars
as an exporting charge, in 2016 their costs notably rose over sixty
billion
. Compared with the first two groups, the other three categories had a lower exportation
value
in both 2015 and 2016. When it comes to gems and
jewelry
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jewellery
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, their initial
cost
was above 40
billion
dollars
,
then
it slightly declined until it reached 40
billion
dollars
in 2016.
According to
the figure, the agriculture sector charged about 31
billion
dollars
for their
products
to be exported in 2016 after they escalated the
cost
by probably 1
billion
. Surprisingly, in 2016 textiles had the same exporting
value
as agricultural
products
, but it had the lowest
value
in 2015 with around 27
billion
dollars
.
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