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United states dollars The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

United states dollars The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides key information about the cost of exports in different sectors between 2015 and 2016.The units are measured in
united states
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United States
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dollars
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Overall
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 it is clear from the graph that, petroleum
products
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 and
engineereed
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engineered
engineering
 goods had the highest levels of
value
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 respectively . Following that Gems and
jewlery
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jewellery
 with reasonable cost
whereas
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 agricultural
products
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 and textiles were the least valued.
According to
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 what is shown,the estimated
value
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 of all the five
products
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were
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 approximately the same in 2015 and 2016.Petroleum and engineered
products
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 have
the
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a
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value
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 of nearly 60 billion
dollars
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. Gems and
jewlery
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jewellery
was
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were
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 the second with approximately 40 billion
dollars
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. The
last
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 were agricultural
products
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 and textiles with about 30 billion
dollars
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. In terms of the two given years, there is
no
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not
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 much difference with regard to the estimated
value
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although
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 in 2016, Petroleum and engineered
products
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 had
highest
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the highest
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value
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 in comparison with
it
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its
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 cost in 2015.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dollars, products, value with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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