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The table shows the number of universities ranked top 200 in the world (2011) in three subjects in five countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The table shows the number of universities ranked top 200 in the world (2011) in three subjects in five countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The supplied table depicts three main subjects, namely biology, medicine and
psychology
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 in terms of the average
number
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 of
universities
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 which ranked top 200 in five different leading countries, namely Canada, New
Zealand
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, Australia, The
USA
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 and The UK in 2011.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that The
USA
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 comprised the highest
number
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 of
universities
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 which significantly ranked top 200 in the world, where students can gain tertiary education in both three given subjects. Regarding
psychology
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, the
USA
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 was the top-ranked country with an overwhelming amount of
universities
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, precisely 58,
while
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 the UK comprised only half of
this
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number
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. Australia and Canada were slightly equal, with 17 and 14.
On the other hand
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, New
Zealand
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 comprised only 4 highly qualified
universities
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 in terms of
psychology
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.
Moreover
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, high-educational areas where biology is the main field, were slightly different from
psychology
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, in Australia and Canada
a
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the
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 same
number
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 of prestigious
universities
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,
while
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 New
Zealand
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 touched the bottom point. The
USA
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 reached the vertex with 69
universities
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.
However
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, leading
universities
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 which include medicine reached the nadir in New
Zealand
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 with 2,
while
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 The
USA
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 took the leading position with 54 around the world.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words psychology, number, universities, zealand, usa with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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