The table shows the number of universities ranked top 200 in the world (2011) in three subjects in five countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The table shows the number of universities ranked top 200 in the world (2011) in three subjects in five countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The supplied table depicts three main subjects, namely biology, medicine and
psychology
in terms of the average
number
of
universities
which ranked top 200 in five different leading countries, namely Canada, New
Zealand
, Australia, The
USA
and The UK in 2011.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that The
USA
comprised the highest
number
of
universities
which significantly ranked top 200 in the world, where students can gain tertiary education in both three given subjects. Regarding
psychology
, the
USA
was the top-ranked country with an overwhelming amount of
universities
, precisely 58,
while
the UK comprised only half of
this
number
. Australia and Canada were slightly equal, with 17 and 14.
On the other hand
, New
Zealand
comprised only 4 highly qualified
universities
in terms of
psychology
.
Moreover
, high-educational areas where biology is the main field, were slightly different from
psychology
, in Australia and Canada
a
Correct article usage
the
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same
number
of prestigious
universities
,
while
New
Zealand
touched the bottom point. The
USA
reached the vertex with 69
universities
.
However
, leading
universities
which include medicine reached the nadir in New
Zealand
with 2,
while
The
USA
took the leading position with 54 around the world.
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