The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the
coffee
and
tea
drinking habits of residents across five Australian
cities
. It is evident that, except for Adelaide, the percentage of people who visited a café for
coffee
or
tea
is higher than those who purchased fresh or instant
coffee
. In Sydney, Melbourne, Hobart, and Brisbane, a significant proportion of the population prefers to consume
coffee
or
tea
in a café, with more than 60% of residents in the first three
cities
following
this
trend. The proportion of instant
coffee
purchased in these five
cities
ranges between 45% and 55%, which is less than the percentage of café visitors but higher than those who bought fresh
coffee
. Among the three options, purchasing fresh
coffee
is the least popular.
Overall
,
coffee
and
tea
drinking habits in Sydney and Melbourne are more prominent compared to Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.
However
, the percentage of people buying instant
coffee
and having
coffee
or
tea
at a café is similar, slightly above 50% in Sydney and Melbourne, and nearly 50% in the other
cities
. In conclusion, in four out of the five
cities
, residents prefer having
coffee
or
tea
in a café, with fresh
coffee
being the least
favored
Change the spelling
favoured
show examples
option among the three habits.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea, cities, café with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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