The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart illustrates the

coffee

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and

tea

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drinking habits of residents across five Australian

cities

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. It is evident that, except for Adelaide, the percentage of people who visited a café for

coffee

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tea

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is higher than those who purchased fresh or instant

coffee

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. In Sydney, Melbourne, Hobart, and Brisbane, a significant proportion of the population prefers to consume

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tea

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in a café, with more than 60% of residents in the first three

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trend. The proportion of instant

coffee

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purchased in these five

cities

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ranges between 45% and 55%, which is less than the percentage of café visitors but higher than those who bought fresh

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. Among the three options, purchasing fresh

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is the least popular.

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and

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drinking habits in Sydney and Melbourne are more prominent compared to Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.

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, the percentage of people buying instant

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and having

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tea

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at a café is similar, slightly above 50% in Sydney and Melbourne, and nearly 50% in the other

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. In conclusion, in four out of the five

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, residents prefer having

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tea

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in a café, with fresh

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being the least

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option among the three habits.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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