You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter Introduce yourself. Say why you are interested in this sports club. Ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members,costs
Dear Ali,
I am writing to inquire about
join in
your private sports Wrong verb form
joining
club
course
. I have planned
to commence soon a Wrong verb form
plan
course
. I am hoping you would
teach me some skills and knowledge.
My name is Javohir Pulatov and now I am studying 10th grade in fifth school Wrong verb form
will
Muborak
Change preposition
in Muborak
city
.My major is boxing and I have experience from boxing Capitalize word
City
course
. My Fix the agreement mistake
courses
last
boxing course
hasn't
Verb problem
didn't
amenities
and there Add a missing verb
have amenities
is
Wrong verb form
was
not
discipline like other boxing Correct your spelling
no
club
courses. There I had attended two years until my patience filled up.
In my childhood my father took me to boxing matches and in my heart have interest
in boxing Correct article usage
an interest
then
I work
hard on myself and my father took me nearest private boxing Wrong verb form
worked
club
in Karshi which is named Mike Tayson juniors
. There Capitalize word
Juniors
have
a lot of teenagers like me. My first boxing coach is Martin Edagard who is coach the Verb problem
are
Mike
Tayson Change preposition
of Mike
juniors
boxing Fix the agreement mistake
Junior
club
.Martin is also
the person who made me interested in boxing.
What kind of conditions,equipment and what kind of environment will be reflected in your boxing classes.
I look forward to hearing from you soon
Best regards
Pulatov JavohirChange the punctuation
?
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Logical Structure
Ensure the letter includes a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. The structure could be improved by separating the introduction, your background, and questions into distinct paragraphs.
Complete Response
Pay attention to grammar and punctuation for a more polished and professional appearance.
Suitable Writing Tone
The tone of your letter is suitable for a formal request. You balanced politeness with direct questions well.
Complete Response
You included a personal background story that adds context and interest, and explained your long-time interest in boxing.
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