The chart below gives information about Southland\'s main exports in 2000, *20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives information about Southland\'s main exports in 2000, *20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph below shows the main exports in
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southland
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in 2000 and in the current year and gives future predictions for 2025. It is clear from the graph that all three exports have changes starting in 2000 and continuing till 2025.
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what is shown international tourism is experiencing
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dramatic growth and it is expected to continue. in 2000 it was 8 billion and reached nearly 9 nowadays and it will
cary
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carry
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in 2025
In contrast
, meat products have a significant decline starting from 6
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in 2000 and reaching nearly 5.5 nowadays and it is projected to reach 5
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in 2025
On the other
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dairy products are not stable
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the graph it was 7 billion in 2000 and nowadays it is climbing
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billion and it is predicted to get a huge fall in 2025 with nearly 9.5.
Overall
we can say that all three exports experience different rates of growth and fall.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • trends
  • projections
  • comparisons
  • dairy products
  • meat products
  • international tourism
  • significant growth
  • decline
  • export values
  • overview
  • highlight
  • sectors
  • future projections
  • data analysis
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