The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart gives information concerning and gives a helicopter view on the percentage of visitors who came to the UK

Also

, indicates three different types

for

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visiting holiday, business and visit friends or relatives. Generally speaking, we can see that the

propurtion

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proportion

of people who visited the UK for

holiday

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a holiday

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reached

the

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a

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high of 9

millions

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million

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rate from the year 1999.

In addition

, the figure

of

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business income

flactured

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fractured

fluctuated

and

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unstabilized over the period.

Next,

the rate of mankind who visited for

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friends

freinds

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friends

or relatives were being approximately increased over the years till the year 2004

On the other hand

,

in

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the

begening

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beginning

of

year

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the year

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1989

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1989,

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the visiting

for

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apply

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business working

were

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plunged to the number of 6 million .

However

,

the

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following years it

is

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rose to a huge figure

Then

, it dropped dramatically

by

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the number of 6 million again .

Furthermore

, it is clear to say that people who visited friends or relatives

were

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apply

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peaked at 5 million figure .