The charts below show Australian dollars in Australia’s trade in three nations from 2004 to 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show Australian dollars in Australia’s trade in three nations from 2004 to 2009

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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dipects
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depict
the dollars of
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Australian
Australia
from 2004 to 2009 , it is clear from the graph that we have
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2002 to 2005
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per cent
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2008 .
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import
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,
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, the
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country
mostly
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to
import
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, some food and clothes
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country
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and can not to providing it and
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should
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it out side from the another
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. So, we have
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on the chart .
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export
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can we have
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more
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money with it, and a lot of things
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the dollar in
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that
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why some
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had
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rise a
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export
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, the
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and
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we can make a
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export
and
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sure if
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words import, country, export with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trade surplus
  • trade deficit
  • bilateral trade
  • exports
  • imports
  • economic relationship
  • year-on-year growth
  • trade volume
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trough
  • stagnation
  • commodities
  • market forces
  • import/export ratio
  • financial quarter
  • trade barriers
  • tariff
  • free trade agreement
  • economic indicators
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