The pie charts below show the coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world.

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The pie chart provides data about

coffee

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in three main fields

that

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consumption, amount of making and income all around the world.

Overall

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, it can be seen that in the first pie, the highest percentage belongs to Europe,

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in the second to South Africa. The third chart that shows the profit where the greatest was from Delivering.

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with, the majority part Europeans

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41 per

cent

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consume

coffee

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the lowest is 8 per

cent

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in Japan. In the USA 39 per

centof

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cent of

citizens drink

coffee

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and 12 in other parts of the Earth. Regarding

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manufacturing, there was 44 per

cent

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in South Africa which is the highest one and only 18 in Japan which is the lowest. Vietnam's industries showed similar results,

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percent

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per cent

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On the contrary

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, there was a fifth part of the pie 22 per

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in Indonesia.

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half of a hundred the greatest income from

coffee

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was taken from delivery companies, only 10 per

cent

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from exports. In the field of retailers, the point is doubled

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24 and comes up with 15 per

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from local producers.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, cent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

191 words

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The pie charts below show the coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world.

Countries should spend money on trains rather than new roads. Do you agree or disagree?

In most successful organisations, some people believe that communication between managers and workers is important, other people say that other factors are more important. What is your opinion?

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example for your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.