Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
map
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illustrates the structure of the town of Brandfield. Area planners have decided to construct a new shopping store for the place, and two urban named S1 and S2 have been proposed.
Overall
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, it is clear from the
map
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that the golf course and park have a huge territory,
while
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the industrial
estate
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is the smallest place. In
this
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place, the golf course and the park take a large amount of ground on the west side and the industrial
estate
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takes a little territory and is placed on the east side of the
map
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.
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, in the north of the
map
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, there are housing estates with a less significant size than the
city
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centre
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in the middle of the
map
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.
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,
city
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S2 is located in the southeast part of the
map
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,
whereas
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city
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S2 is in the middle of the
City
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centre
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and housing
estate
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. There is
also
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the lake that starts at the southwest of the
map
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crossing the
city
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centre
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middle and ends at the north. After crossing twice the lake, there is the road that starts near the
city
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S2 and continues
firstly
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passing through the
city
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centre
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and following that goes to a housing
estate
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and there is another road that goes to the industrial
estate
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.
Additionally
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, the train road starts at the south-east of the
map
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and crosses two roads and a lake, ending at the north-east of the
map
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words map, estate, city, centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 9 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proximity
  • residential area
  • industrial zone
  • city center
  • main road
  • benefits
  • convenience
  • traffic congestion
  • accessibility
  • workers
  • compare
  • differences
  • pros and cons
  • suitable
  • analysis
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