The diagram below shows how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The picture illustrates the construction of a simple
water
filter and how it functions to produce clean and suitable drinking water
Overall
, the system includes some natural materials and basic equipment that can be used to produce drinkable water
after few
steps.
Correct article usage
a few
Firstly
, there are two tanks, the tank
in higher
position is used to purify the impure Add an article
a higher
water
and the other one is used to storage
clean drinking Replace the word
store
water
. There are three natural materials inside the first tank
: sand, charcoal and gravel, the main mission of those things is removing
bacteria and dirt Change the verb form
to remove
out of
the impure Change preposition
from
water
. Two tanks are connected together by a pipe that runs from the bottom of first
Change the article
the first
tank
into the side of the second tank
. Lastly
, a tap is equipped at the bottom of the storage tank
to release the drinkable water
.
The process starts by lifting the lid of the first tank
and pouring the impure water
into the tank
. The water
passes through the sand layer at the beginning to remove residue, after that, the water
then
goes to the charcoal layer, the charcoal can take some small dirt that people can not see out of the water
. Moreover
, the water
has to pass through the gravel layer at the final to become clean, fresh and suitable for drinking. Finally
, the water
after being purified goes to the storage tank
through the pipe and it can be released by the tap to use.Submitted by dohuyhoang on
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