The diagram below shows how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how a simple  water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean  drinking water. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The picture illustrates the construction of a simple
water
filter and how it functions to produce clean and suitable drinking
water
Overall
, the system includes some natural materials and basic equipment that can be used to produce drinkable
water
after
few
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a few
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steps.
Firstly
, there are two tanks, the
tank
in
higher
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a higher
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position is used to purify the impure
water
and the other one is used to
storage
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store
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clean drinking
water
. There are three natural materials inside the first
tank
: sand, charcoal and gravel, the main mission of those things is
removing
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to remove
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bacteria and dirt
out of
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from
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the impure
water
. Two tanks are connected together by a pipe that runs from the bottom of
first
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the first
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tank
into the side of the second
tank
.
Lastly
, a tap is equipped at the bottom of the storage
tank
to release the drinkable
water
. The process starts by lifting the lid of the first
tank
and pouring the impure
water
into the
tank
. The
water
passes through the sand layer at the beginning to remove residue, after that, the
water
then
goes to the charcoal layer, the charcoal can take some small dirt that people can not see out of the
water
.
Moreover
, the
water
has to pass through the gravel layer at the final to become clean, fresh and suitable for drinking.
Finally
, the
water
after being purified goes to the storage
tank
through the pipe and it can be released by the tap to use.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, tank with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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