The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The graph illustrates
amount
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of goods which were carried in the United Kingdom using road,
water
, rail, and
pipeline
from 1974 and 2002.
Overall
,
pipeline
and road have a slight rise from the start,
while
rail and
water
were constant. Though
water
had a slight fall, it ended with an
increase
, including
pipeline
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pipelines
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.
Furthermore
,
water
was highest throughout
while
pipeline
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the pipeline
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was at the bottom throughout as well. All the four means of transport were kind of constant from 1975 and changed towards 1980. On the one hand,
pipeline
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pipelines
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and
water
increase
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just around 1982.
On the other hand
, rail and
water
had a slight drop at that time.
Water
had a slight
increase
up until 1990,
thereafter
, it was constant
to
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towards 1995 and
finally
increased until
year
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2000.
Water
began at around 70
million
tonnes
and ended at almost 100
million
tonnes
leading throughout.
Moreover
,
pipeline
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the pipeline
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had the lowest
tonnes
throughout.
In addition
, it began at around 8
million
tonnes
, it
further
had an
increase
after 1980 and had about 21 truckloads
tonnes
.
Additionally
, it continued being constant and had a little drop to 20
million
tonnes
from around 1993 till the end of
ear
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2000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, pipeline, increase, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 4 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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