The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The graph illustrates
amount
of goods which were carried in the United Kingdom using road, Add an article
the amount
water
, rail, and pipeline
from 1974 and 2002.
Overall
, pipeline
and road have a slight rise from the start, while
rail and water
were constant. Though water
had a slight fall, it ended with an increase
, including pipeline
. Fix the agreement mistake
pipelines
Furthermore
, water
was highest throughout while
pipeline
was at the bottom throughout as well.
All the four means of transport were kind of constant from 1975 and changed towards 1980. On the one hand, Add an article
the pipeline
a pipeline
pipeline
and Fix the agreement mistake
pipelines
water
increase
just around 1982. Wrong verb form
increased
On the other hand
, rail and water
had a slight drop at that time. Water
had a slight increase
up until 1990, thereafter
, it was constant to
towards 1995 and Change preposition
apply
finally
increased until year
2000.
Change the article
the year
Water
began at around 70 million
tonnes
and ended at almost 100 million
tonnes
leading throughout. Moreover
, pipeline
had the lowest Add an article
the pipeline
tonnes
throughout. In addition
, it began at around 8 million
tonnes
, it further
had an increase
after 1980 and had about 21 truckloads tonnes
. Additionally
, it continued being constant and had a little drop to 20 million
tonnes
from around 1993 till the end of ear
2000.Correct your spelling
early
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, pipeline, increase, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 4 times.
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