The following pie charts show the results of a survey into the most popular leisure activities in the United States of America in 1999 and 2009.
The pie charts illustrate a summary of a survey about the most popular leisure activities in the USA in the years 1999 and 2009.
Overall
, at the beginning of the period
, walking was the most popular activity amongst Americans, whereas
yoga made up the smallest part of the chart. In comparison, walking still was the biggest segment, while
jogging was the least popular in the USA in 2009.
Soccer comprised 17% of leisure activities in 1999, and experienced a slight growth of 1% in 2009. At the beginning of the period
, camping and swimming were 8% and 9% respectively, and rose to 9% and 18% in 2009.
By contrast
, bicycling, while
comprised 12% of leisure activities in 1999, fell to 7% in 10 year period
. Additionally
, at the start, jogging and aerobics were at 7% and 13% respectively, but they declined to 3% and 4%, at the end
of the period
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