The graph below shows the amount of UK investments in clean energy from 2008 to 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart demonstrates
sectors
that have become the focus for
UK Change preposition
of
investment
in clean energy
between 2008 and 2015.
In 2008, there are
only 3 clean Wrong verb form
were
energy
sectors
which are invested in the UK such
as wind
, energy
smart technologies and other sectors
. If we compare these sectors
, the biggest investment
was in the wind
sector, which is approximately about 2 billion
pounds
. This
similar pattern happened for 3 periods in a row, between 2008 and 2010. Wind
technologies investment
experienced a rise in 2009 made them to near
7 Change the word
nearly
billion
pounds
during this
year, on the
contrary
Add the comma(s)
contrary,
wind
investment
declined about 1 million pounds
in 2010 which made them to only 6 million pounds
.
Even though there were fluctuations between 2008 and 2015, clean energy
investment
escalated in 2015 if
Correct word choice
apply
it
compared to 2008, they have Correct pronoun usage
apply
risen
their Verb problem
raised
investment
150x
times in 2015, Correct your spelling
150
nonetheless
; the other clean energy
investment
was approximately the same in these two periods. In 2008 and 2015, other clean energy
investment
totaled about 2 Fix the agreement mistake
investments
billion
pounds
, nevertheless
; wind
investment
jumped to near
13 Change the word
nearly
billion
pounds
in 2015.
In conclusion, UK clean energy
investment
escalated between 2008 and 2015, the biggest climb happened in wind
investment
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