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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The presented chart illustrates the
percentage
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 of
people
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 owning and renting household accommodation in England and Wales in the years 1918 and 2011.
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,
it is clear that
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 from 1918 to 2011 the
count
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 of
people
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 renting decreased and the amount of
people
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 owning increased by
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 time. Notably, in the middle of the period, the
percentage
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 of renting and owning
people
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 was exactly the same. In accordance with the chart, in 1918 the number of
people
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 renting was almost 77% and the
count
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 of
people
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 owning was about 23%.
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, in 1961 the
percentage
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 of
people
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 renting had ceaselessly decreased to approximately 59% and the
count
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 of
people
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 owning
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 increased to 41% respectively.
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, in 1991 the
percentage
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 of
people
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 renting significantly reduced to 32%, at that time the
count
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 of
people
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 owning had
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a cosiderable
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considerable
 growth
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 68%.
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, in 2011 the
percentage
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 changed to 64%
people
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 owning and 36%
people
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 renting.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, people, count with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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