The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The presented chart illustrates the
percentage
of people
owning and renting household accommodation in England and Wales in the years 1918 and 2011.
Overall
, it is clear that
from 1918 to 2011 the count
of people
renting decreased and the amount of people
owning increased by this
time. Notably, in the middle of the period, the percentage
of renting and owning people
was exactly the same.
In accordance with the chart, in 1918 the number of people
renting was almost 77% and the count
of people
owning was about 23%. Moreover
, in 1961 the percentage
of people
renting had ceaselessly decreased to approximately 59% and the count
of people
owning steady
increased to 41% respectively.
Change the word
steadily
Furthermore
, in 1991 the percentage
of people
renting significantly reduced to 32%, at that time the count
of people
owning had Correct article usage
a cosiderable
cosiderable
growth Correct your spelling
considerable
to
68%. Change preposition
of
Also
, in 2011 the percentage
changed to 64% people
owning and 36% people
renting.Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
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