The charts below show the proportion of people’s total spending in a particular European country was spent on different commodities and services in 1958 and in 2008.
The pie charts compare the total amount of
money
by citizens on various items and facilities in a special European state between 1958 and 2008.
Overall
, it is clear that
the primary amount of the budget was spent on clothing in 1958, whereas
housing took the second place. Nevertheless
, in 2008, the most spent commodity was housing among people.
To begin
, we can notice that the primary aspect in which individuals invested plenty sum of cash was clothing consisting of 32% of the whole pie, whereas
the proportion of wasted money
on both luxury goods and food was approximately the same with just respectively 7% and 8% in 1958. Moreover
, citizens enjoyed spending about 22% of their money
on housing aspects. The travel and transport services required only 13% of the whole budget, and the entertainment consisted of just 18%.
In 2008, it is noticeable that people decided to invest 32% of the budget on housing services and only 12% on clothing. Likewise
, the total amount of finance was the same on
food and luxury by 17%, Change preposition
for
whereas
just 8% of the whole money
was invested in travel commodities, which is twice less than on
entertainment which had only 16%.Change preposition
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