The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
diagram compares the floor design of a public library
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20 years ago with
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the present.
Overall
, it experienced several changes, ranging from relocation,
removal
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to construction of new facilities. Focusing first on the top left side, games using electronic devices
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exist
while
there are several sofas and some facilities for children.
In addition
, on the middle left,
adult
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fiction
books
area was relocated to the opposite
site
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. At present,
computer
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room is newly constructed in the bottom left.
It is clear that
tables and chairs were removed during
this
period.
Next,
a children’s
books
room was converted into a lecture room.
Furthermore
, in the centre right, there are a lot of things now,
however
, there
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only adult non-fiction
books
in the past.
Latsly
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Lastly
, in the bottom right,
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enquiry desk area, where users could obtain tickets and return
books
, was changed into a spacious cafe.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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