The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with the date they opened, kilometers of route, and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph depicts data concerning underground railway systems including three categories(date opened,
kilometers
of route, and annual passengers) in six big cities(Change the spelling
kilometres
London
, Paris, Tokyo
, Washington
DC
, Kyoto
, and Los
Angeles
).
Overall
, it is remarkable that the railway of London
opened the earliest, thus
it ran the longest kilomerters
of route. Correct your spelling
kilometres
Moreover
, Tokyo
holds the most number of passengers annually.
In terms of London
, Paris and Tokyo
, the length of the route was between over 150 and nearly 400, especially London
had the longest distance at 394. Change preposition
in London
Additionally
, in Tokyo
, its passengers arrived at approximately 1928 million every year, which was the largest volume of all.
With regard to the other three lately
opened railway cities(Rephrase
recently
Washington
DC
, Kyoto
, and Los
Angeles
), Washington
DC
's gross kilometers
ranked first at 126, Change the spelling
kilometres
while
Los
Angeles
and Kyoto
at 28 and 11 respectively. Except the Washington
DC
which owned over 100 million persons yearly, both Kyoto
and Los
Angeles
were around 50 million.Submitted by xeyojnn on
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