Overpopulation is the world's most serious environmental problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In today's fast-paced

world

, overpopulation is often viewed as a major environmental problem

due to

the pressure on natural

resources

and contributes to various

form

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of

pollution

. I strongly believe that overcrowding impacts our

world

adversely.

To begin

with, overpopulation does have a strong impact on the

world

's environment for various reasons.

Firstly

, an increase in population means

that

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more

pollution

.

In other words

,

expand

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in population

cause

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new houses, facilities and factories, more vehicles on the roads, and more farming.

Therefore

, these are concluded as

a

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air, water, soil, and

the

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noise

pollution

. It is certain that

pollution

is a significant issue and it can have serious issues on human and animal health.

On the other hand

, one of the major

problem

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problems

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is

decrease

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the decrease

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on

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natural

resources

. With the rise of population,

requirement

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of

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water and

fosil

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fossil

fuels has become more critical to

sustain

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daily lives.

Moreover

, the modern

world

is consuming more than it can produce. People

are continuously buy

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new clothes,

technological

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and technological

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devices, and

construct

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constructing

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new apartments.

This

lead

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to

waste

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substantial

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amount of natural

resources

. Unfortunately, high usage of

resources

brings various detriments in the future

such

as global warming,

need

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of

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water, and bad air quality. In conclusion,

while

overpopulation

increase

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day by day, it

is

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undoubtedly

cause

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causes

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significant issues

such

as consuming natural

resources

and

causes

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causing

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pollutions

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pollution

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on

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to

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environment

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the environment

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.

Therefore

, overcrowding has adverse effects on our

world

and

this

is one of the major

problem

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problems

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for

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our daily lives.