If a product is good and meet customer needs,then people will buy it. So advertising it is unneccessary. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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marketing
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advert
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advertising
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plays a crucial role
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of
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products
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. Some people ,
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then
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are not much needed. I firmly
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disagree with
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the market
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product
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sale
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sales
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advertisement is
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necessary
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ways
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product
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, not only features of the products but
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compared
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the
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with other company's
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product
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products
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. Even if the
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launched
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by
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brand they still
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to spread awareness about the
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the Iphone
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Iphone
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iPhone
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is the top brand among
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mobile phone companies and
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knows
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as
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reliabilty
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reliability
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, still
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adverts to launch new mobile in order to explain and compare the features of the
product
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the
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product
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is average , adverts
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potential
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the potential
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to influence consumers to buy the
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atleast
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at least
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, no doubt
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advert is
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a good
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tool to introduce
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new
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, it
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helps to
icrease
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increase
the
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of the
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that is
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already on the
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shelves
shells
.Companies,
for example
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sale
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sales
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and No
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, offer discounts on the products even if
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product
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is reliable, so for promoting the offers to consumers they
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advertise
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through e-mails and social media.
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,no matter how
much
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good
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product
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the product
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is
good
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apply
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, to dominate the market advertisement is needed.
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this
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era
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the
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advertisement
becvomes
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becomes
become
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an
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essential part of
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product
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a product
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.
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more chances of failure the products and
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the sales of existing
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product
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products
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.
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task achievement
Your essay provides a clear and relevant response to the prompt, but ensure that your ideas are fully expanded with specific examples and explanations for a stronger argument.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a logical flow between paragraphs and within paragraphs. Use more linking words and phrases to guide the reader through your points, making the essay more cohesive.
language
Work on grammatical accuracy and spelling. Minor errors are noticeable and can distract the reader. For instance, 'adds' should be 'ads,' 'satissfied' should be 'satisfied,' and 'reliabilty' should be 'reliability.'
coherence cohesion
Your introduction effectively sets the context for the discussion and clearly states your position on the topic.
task achievement
You present a clear argument for the importance of advertisements in introducing new products and maintaining sales of existing products.
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