These days many young people are spending less time doing outdoor activities such as hiking, mountain climbing, and enjoying nature. What are the reasons for this? How can we encourage them to do more of these activities?
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advancement
of technology is changing the lifestyle of our younger generations. With today's advanced Correct article usage
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technology,
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, they can play a video game, watch a movie or even shop online. All these various Linking Words
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while
, it doesn't make you physically tired, so it wouldn't be odd if you rather Linking Words
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schedules
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can make a good memory for children and help them to value reality not just virtual environments. Schools can Linking Words
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take students for mountain climbing as a school camp. In Linking Words
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computer devices.
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parents and schools should take some steps in introducing them to Remove the conjunction
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Make sure to address all parts of the prompt clearly and comprehensively. For example, you can briefly mention a few more reasons for young people spending less time on outdoor activities, like safety concerns or urbanization.
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Include a more compelling hook in the introduction to grab the reader's attention. Additionally, ensure each paragraph transitions smoothly into the next to enhance coherence.
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Proofread for minor grammar and word choice errors, such as "doen't envovle" which should be "don't involve," to strengthen the clarity of your writing.
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The essay provides a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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The examples provided, such as the impact of technology and suggestions for parents and schools, are relevant and specific.