The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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We can see the diagram

show

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shows

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that

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how to produce

electricity

by using geothermal.

Overall

, there are 5 main steps in the process of producing

electricity

. beginning with the enterment of the cold

water

and ending

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with

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electricity

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the electricity

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appearance. First of all, the cold

water

pumped

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is pumped

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down an underground tube with 4. 5km.

Secondly

, entering the injection well and passing the geothermal zone which is made of hot rocks.

Thirdly

, getting through the production well, the cold

water

changed to the hot

water

than

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pumped up back to the ground.

In addition

, passing the

conderser

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condenser

, the hot

water

becomes

the

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steam.

Finally

, using the generator turbine, powered by the steam changed into powered by turbine

and

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produces

electricity

which

spread

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spreads

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to the place that people need.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, water with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

126 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

geothermal energy
renewable source
sustainable
drilling wells
hot water and steam
drive turbines
generate electricity
conversion
cooling process
re-injected
efficiency
environmental impact

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