The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
As we all know, a geothermal power plant is a big machine which is for producing electricity.
However
, we only see the big metal frame on the
ground
but always ignore the structure under the
ground
in our daily lives. There is a large
water
box for housing cold
water
on the
ground
. We will transport it to at least 4. 5
kilometer
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kilometers
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to the injection well through a long tube. The next horizontal place is the
geotherml
Correct your spelling
geothermal
zone, where we will heat the
water
with hot rocks. When the
water
arrives in the production well, there will be another vertical long tube to transport the hot
water
to the surface of the
ground
. The hot
water
will enter the condenser when it arrives, and the steam will enter a new place, turn around and turn around in the turbine. When it gets enough power, the generator will
finally
turn it into electricity. Electricity enters the big metal frame through wires.
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  • geothermal energy
  • renewable source
  • sustainable
  • drilling wells
  • hot water and steam
  • drive turbines
  • generate electricity
  • conversion
  • cooling process
  • re-injected
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
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