The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
We can see the diagram
show
Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
that
how to produce Correct word choice
apply
electricity
by using geothermal.
Overall
, there are 5 main steps in the process of producing electricity
. beginning with the enterment of the cold water
and ending of
Change preposition
with
electricity
appearance.
First of all, the cold Correct article usage
the electricity
water
pumped
down an underground tube with 4. 5km. Add a missing verb
is pumped
Secondly
, entering the injection well and passing the geothermal zone which is made of hot rocks. Thirdly
, getting through the production well, the cold water
changed to the hot water
than
pumped up back to the ground. Replace the word
then
In addition
, passing the conderser
, the hot Correct your spelling
condenser
water
becomes the
steam. Change the article
apply
Finally
, using the generator turbine, powered by the steam changed into powered by turbine and
produces Correct word choice
apply
electricity
which spread
to the place that people need.Wrong verb form
spreads
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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