the graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy, in the UK, 2000-2010. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart exhibits the proportion of employment in three divisions of the fiscal domain in the UK for a decade from 2000.
Overall
, self-employed and jobs in the public sector were on the rise despite some fluctuations in the number of government employees. Notably, private jobs lost their charm over time until the end.
To begin
with, employment rates in the public sector were almost stable at under 40% until 2003 when they slightly elevated to 40%. Then
it climbed to reach approximately 50% in 2005,which dipped down to 45% in the following year. It soared a little above 50% afterwards, in the final year. Whereas
, people who worked for themselves showed steady progress from under 20% to 30% in 2010, with the exception of 2002 and 2003 where it climbed down a bit to the original rate in 2000. The share of Private jobs gradually declined from around 50% to a lowest of 30% in 2010.Submitted by krishnabalu1984 on
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