The table below gives information about student enrolments at Manchester University in 1937, 1967 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph displays the
number
of students
enrolled at Manchester University in the years 1937,1967, 2017.
Overall
, the number
of enrollments tend
to increase year after year. The Correct subject-verb agreement
tends
percentage
of female and
Correct word choice
apply
students
overseas increase
abruptly in the Wrong verb form
has increased
last
year. The enrollment of men dramatically dropped the
Change preposition
in the
last
50 years.
In 1937, the number
of students
started with 327 enrollments, from there to 2017 the number
of students
significantly increased to have in 2017 6254 students
. The percentage
of women initiated in 1937 with 45% dropped 10
% in 1967 and went up Change preposition
to 10
in
20 % in 2017 with 55% of enrollments. The proportion of Change preposition
to
students
overseas was 6% in 1937 and increased the percentage
due to
the enroll
of Replace the word
enrollment
students
from 102 different countries reaching 32 %.
The proportion of men students
was in 1937 55%, the percentage
grew 10% in 1967 and dramatically dropped to 45% in 2017. The same happened with students
living nearly 40 miles of
Manchester, started Change preposition
from
at
1937 Change preposition
in
with
55% Change preposition
at
however
, throughout the years significantly got down to just below 2% in 2017.Submitted by daniruspi on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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