The bar chart below shows the percentages of three groups of Japanese children taking part in four kinds of activities in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The presented bar diagram provides information about the percentages of
the
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lived
in Japan that Wrong verb form
living
was
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were
devided
into three categories engaging in four types of activities in 2018. From an Correct your spelling
divided
overall
persperctive
, Correct your spelling
perspective
it is clear that
the majority of children in Japan choose to play Computer
Games
among others and the least wanted task was Reading.
Examining the details, in Malaysia, there was exactly a half percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
the
adolescents Correct article usage
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who
prefer to spend their activities in Correct pronoun usage
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Computer
Games
. Watching TV placed as the second highest proportion, with 30 percent
of children. Change the spelling
per cent
Moreover
, Board Games
and Reading followed closely behind with a quarter and 20 percent
, respectively. The same condition Change the spelling
per cent
was
happened in China, Unnecessary verb
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although
the number of Computer
Games
had
Verb problem
was
a
lower number in 10 Correct article usage
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percent
compared to Malaysia.
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per cent
In addition
, the most interesting point was Nigeria, which had 60 percents
of young people who chose Fix the agreement mistake
percent
playing
Change the verb form
to play
Computer
Games
, with only half of that
Correct pronoun usage
them
enjoy
Wrong verb form
enjoying
to Watch
TV (30%). Change the verb form
watching
Moreover
, only 20 percent
like to play Board Change the spelling
per cent
Games
and 10 percent
vote for Reading. Change the spelling
per cent
Furthermore
, although
Computer
Games
reached a half proportion in Sudan, the number of Board Games
and Watching TV had the same conditons
, being 30% of the total. Reading stayed constant as the least common activity, with only 10 Correct your spelling
conditions
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per cent
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Vocabulary: Replace the words computer, games, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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