The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.
The diagram provides information about the steps that need to be taken in order to produce
ethanol
, which is a form of biofuel resource.
Overall
, there are 3 main stages to produce
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producing
ethanol
, including the absorption of energy, the production and consumption of ethanol
, and the emitting of the biofuel resources back into the environment.
Initially
, energy is absorbed by plants
and trees, including the combination of sunlight and carbon dioxide, which create the crucial components for producing ethanol
. After the plants
and trees are harvested, they enter a phase of pre-processing in order to become cellulose. The cellulose is then
chemically processed to make sugars. The sugars are then
added with microbes to turn them into ethanol
. Produced ethanol
is consumed by cars, trucks, and plants
, which eventually release carbon dioxide back to
the environment. The carbon dioxide in the atmosphere is Change preposition
into
then
re-absorbed by plants
and trees, continuing to repeat the cycle.Submitted by ieltswritingpracticedl on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol, plants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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