The map shows the village park, now and 10 years ago. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps show the development of the village
park
, now and 10 years ago. It can be seen from the maps that the village park
has been modified, which
some facilities are enlarged or narrowed down.
Correct word choice
and
Firstly
, 10 years ago, on the right side of the entrance, there were two tennis court
. On the left side, there was a car Fix the agreement mistake
courts
park
which held a maximum of 20 cars. Moreover
, a football field was located in the centre of the village park
. There was a children
play Change noun form
children's
area
to the east of the tennis court. Also
, to the southeast of the football pitch, there was a pond surrounded by woods on the right side.
Ten years later, most of the facilities remained in the same direction. However
, the number of tennis court
increased to four and the maximum number of cars in the Fix the agreement mistake
courts
carpark
Correct your spelling
car park
raised
to fifty. A picnic Verb problem
rose
area
was added to the southwest of the football pitch. Furthermore
, a children
soft play Change noun form
children's
area
was established to the south of the children
play Change noun form
children's
area
with a toilet located next to it. In addition
, the woods were transformed into a café.Submitted by cherrychan926 on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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