The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by the UK residents in 1999. Summarize the information and make comparison. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the data of
people
travelling to and from the United Kingdom
over the period of two decades: from 1979 to 1999, while
the bar chart represents five countries; Turkey
, Greece, the United States, Spain and France, that were popularly visited by the UK
residents circa 1999.
Overall
, the number of British
citizens travelling overseas surpassed those visiting the United Kingdom
throughout the period. France popularized among British
citizens, whereas
Turkey
was the least preferred holiday destination in the recorded year.
According to
the line graph, the trend of visiting overseas countries rose moderately in the United Kingdom
, which accounted for 20 million
UK
residents travelling abroad in 1984, while
the figure for individuals visiting the UK
increased steadily . Nevertheless
, from 1984 onwards, the trend of British
people
travelling overseas surged overwhelmingly; on the other hand
, even though the UK
was not favoured by many visitors, it did popularize fairly. Notably, in 1999, just over 50 million
UK
residents toured globally, whereas
the United Kingdom
witnessed an influx of just below 30 million
people
.
According to
the bar graph, in 1999, France ranked the highest preferred holiday destination, attracting well over 10 million
people
, which was marginally followed by Spain. On the contrary
, relatively small figures of British
holidaymakers chose to visit the USA, Greece, and Turkey
. To elaborate, despite the inscrutable difference, Turkey
ranked the least visited place, followed by Greece, and then
the USA; all three nations received less than 5 million
British
visitors in 1999.Submitted by hadia.iftikhar126 on
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